Wednesday, March 16, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 3
Some of the most important feedback I received (besides the obvious confirmation of my service's demand) was on how this would be funded. I had to figure out how the new SNAP system would function financially. Since we already have the infrastructure here on campus, additional funding wouldn't necessarily be required, except for a nominal app upgrade. One thing I scrapped was the idea of revealing all the application users' location in order to preserve safety and processing power. Additionally, my idea to speed up drop off time by implementing rider prioritization was well received.
Check out my pitch in detail here:
https://youtu.be/3prYWOTgg5c
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I think the challenge in this assignment was one hard rule: the pitch had to be one minute or below; although you have integrated in it your feedback as well I think it would be helpful to exercise being able to summarize in that one minute all you can about your idea that you would like to transmit to your potential investors. Other than that, I believe your suggestions to the current way SNAP are very valuable and hopefully will one day be taken into consideration.
ReplyDeleteYou can check out my third elevator pitch in the link below:
http://lirimveliu.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
I think you did a great job on the pitch and reflecting on the feedback that you got. I think you did a great job changing your pitch based on the feedback you received from your previous video. If you'd like to check out my pitch, you can do so here: http://sabinaent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteHey Ryan,
ReplyDeleteI really like how much you altered your video based on the feedback you received. I have realized altering the video every time and practicing really does make a huge difference. I think one thing to work on is expanding your idea to really differentiate it from similar ideas. Watch mine here thank you http://donovanvuf.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html